Category Archives: Completed Critiques

The Prodigal’s Christmas Reunion: Completed Critique

“If I remember correctly, falling in love wasn’t listed in the terms of the will,” Lucas said drily.

“Not in the will, no,” Brooke agreed.  “But you never know what God has planned.”

Chapter 1

Chapter 2 and Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7 and Chapter 8

Chapter 9 and Chapter 10

Chapter 11 and Chapter 12, Part 1

Chapter 12, Part 2 and Chapter 13

Chapter 14 and Chapter 15, Part 1

Chapter 15, Part 2 and Chapter 16

Chapter 17

Chapter 18 and Chapter 19, Part 1

Chapter 19, Part 2 and Chapter 21

Chapter 21 and Epilogue

A Ranger Christmas: Completed Critique

“I finally realized that Christmas is real.  As real as that baby.”

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Mister Scrooge to See You: Completed Critique

“Some advice, Miss Dickenson: business transactions such as this, and…many more that I’m sure are made around here, are the reason the Dinner Belle will soon ring no more.”

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Saving Christmas: Completed Critique

“I love hot chocolate!”

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

The Appointment: Completed Critique

“I’m gonna burn!”

Part 1

Part 2

Fireproof: Completed Critique

Seems I’m a hero with everybody in the world except my wife.

Critique:

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

 

Firefighting:

Part 1

Vehicle Rescue

 

Belle and the Beast: A Christian Romance: Completed Critique

Sometimes bad things happen to good people.

 

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Second Glance: Completed Critique

Hey, Scotty!  Jesus, man!

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

The Pretender: Completed Critique

If you come to Jesus, come all the way.

 

Part 1

Part 2

Time Changer: Completed Critique

“Sin abounds!  The Lord is not feared!  Morals have replaced Christ, and with liberal teachings!  Families are in disarray, no authority, no respect!  The world lives without Jesus while the church seems to be filled with professing Christians who do not follow the Lord they claim to believe!”

 

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3