Babylon Rising: Completed Critique

The complete critique of Michael Murphy’s first adventure, beginning to end!

Intro and A Message

Chapter 1, Part 1

Chapter 1, Part 2

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4, Part 1

Chapter 4, Part 2

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7, Part 1

Chapter 7, Part 2

Chapter 7, Part 3

Chapter 8, Part 1

Chapter 8, Part 2

Chapter 8, Part 3

Chapter 9, Part 1

Chapter 9, Part 2

Chapter 10

Chapter 11, Part 1

Chapter 11, Part 2

Chapter 12

Chapter 13

Chapter 14

Chapter 15

Chapters 16 and 17

Chapter 18

Chapter 19

Chapter 20

Chapter 21

Chapter 22

Chapter 23

Chapter 24

Chapter 25

Chapter 26

Chapters 27, 28, and 29

Chapter 30

Chapter 31

Chapter 32

Chapter 33

Chapter 34, Part 1

Chapter 34, Part 2

Chapter 35

Chapter 36

Chapter 37

Chapter 38

Chapter 39

Chapter 40

Chapter 41, Part 1

Chapter 41, Part 2

Chapter 42

Chapter 43

Chapter 44

Chapter 45

Chapter 46

Chapter 47

Chapter 48

Chapter 49

Chapter 50

Chapter 51

Chapter 52

Chapter 53

Chapter 54

Chapter 55

Chapter 56

Chapter 57

Chapter 58

Chapter 59

Chapter 60, Part 1

Chapter 60, Part 2

Chapter 61

Chapter 62, Part 1

Chapter 62, Part 2

Chapter 63

Chapter 64

Chapter 65

Chapter 66

Best New Search

Chapter 67

Chapter 68

Chapter 69

Chapter 70 and Afterword

Posted on December 18, 2011, in Babylon Rising, Books. Bookmark the permalink. 6 Comments.

  1. I think I see a problem with these compilations. They’ll drop off the page pretty quickly, and then they’ll still need to be hunted down if anyone wants to reference them.

    You might want to consider post-dating them to 2020 or stickying them in some way, if you can.

  2. Headless Unicorn Guy

    SEVENTY CHAPTERS plus Preface & Afterword? Either this book is thick enough to be a murder weapon (Colonel Mustard, in the Conservatory, with Babylon Rising) or those are pretty short chapters.

    And it is reassuring. One novel I have in the outline stage came out to around 40 chapters and I thought that was a bit many. Now I see it isn’t. (Though I’m not sure Jerry “Buck” Jenkins, GCAAT, is really a good example for comparison.)

    • Well, the paperback edition I used is 396 pages of story.

      And yes, some of the chapters are super-short. Like one page. Dan Brown chapters, if you will. Or Stephenie Meyer depicting the passage of three months.

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